image courtesy : Google
When those gentle pairs of fingers
Touched my dampened soul
A shriek for life grew within my corpse
My mass, tattered and cold…
She held my finger and didn’t let go off
Cuddling like a bloom
Her eyes opened and met my old gaze
Pampering my unpromising room…
The shabby room then lit like a fortress of destiny
My princess gleamed like a gem
Her shimmering eyes with silky shrilly hairs girdled
Like the sun veiled with a cloudy frame…
courtesy : Google
Her hands waved in the air around
In some type of magical glamour
Entangling with the wires of my dome
Leaving me to mere blubber…
Her cheerful giggles and outraged cries
Infecting the melancholic existence of mine
Setting the birds of nostalgia gratis
Made me something of a shine…
Her crystal brown dreamy eyes
Her sparkling adorable laughter like wine
Made my life infected with love
Unconditional, noble and purely divine.
©2013
Snehal Sahay
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This post is written under the Trifecta Writing challenge. http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/03/trifecta-week-sixty-nine.html
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Beautiful words dripping with amazing tenderness. Only children can make us feel special and inspired. They are truly magical because they transform us from our ordinariness.
True Sini…children are the most precious gems of god…they are the most divine and pure souls. Even stones cant deny the fact that they infect our sternness changing it to gentleness in a flow…
The most precious gift one can dream of…
This is lovely.
Thanks Kitty!
What a soul stirring ,lovely piece this is Snehal!Loved it!:-)
Thanks dear! Loved to hear you loved it….matters a lot.
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Enjoy!
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oh this is so very beautiful. makes me wanna rush to my Lovie’s school and scoop her up into my arms right this moment!
Elated to hear that you liked it so much…a warm hug to your Lovie…
Enjoy!
that was beautiful! you are truly a fantastic writer, it read so smoothly! ❤
Thanks for that Renada…that really means a lot to me…
Would love to see you here again, Enjoy!!! 😀
This is simply stunning!
Thanks so much! Its good to hear such from a mum… 😉
I LOVED it. ❤
It was my sweet pleasure!
Keep visiting!
sweet 🙂
Thanks dear!
Such a lovely, tender piece.
Thanks dear!
It was a pleasure to have you here.
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Beautiful. I remember the first moment my son’s fingers wrapped around my own, and how in those few seconds he stole my heart and changed my life. I may have teared up a little!
Thats amazing how to spell it. They are indeed the purest and most divine souls…a touch may turn a stone to a bud…
I hope your tears were of happiness… don’t want to do the sin of making a beautiful mum like you cry. 😀
Wonderfully done Snehal! pure and fabulous
Children are the most divine and purest souls in the world…they stir even stones to love and life.
Thanks Soumya! Keep visiting!
The background image is making it difficult to read anything. 😦
I think it may be the slow internet connection Mona(for I face it many times). I am utterly sorry for it, wish you will visit again.
Enjoy!
Finally i could read it and the poem is great. Earlier it was all hazy. It must be my connections fault and i thought it was the background image. I am sorry.
Thank god you enjoyed it.
No, you dont need to be sorry at all…I have faced the same problem at times and complained just like you…that was why I knew it wasn’t the background image. Its all ok. 😀
Enjoy and keep visiting!
I really felt like I could imagine being that old man and being lit up by the joy of my grand-kid. Great poem.
Thanks sir. Just tried my best.
Thank you for your support!
Keep visiting!
Charming, simply charming.
Thanks so very much Bjorn!
I just tried to give the thought a wider and divine prospective…happy you all liked it.
Loved your visit. Keep visiting.
Enjoy!
Hello poet, this is the most beautiful work you have presented so far
I am elated to hear this! Thanks for such kind words Paul.
Will try to do my best to satisfy my friends and fellow bloggers. 😀
Greetings! Keep visiting!